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Tune Of Your Heart
Contributed by
LiveTheDream
on
Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 04:20:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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My mind does not speak
It is frozen in thought
Yet your words
Still poison me
Leaving me
Broken inside
It’s such hatred
That suits you best-
Your chosen weaponry
And many wars
Have crossed your path
All ending shamelessly
Your path has no future
Just a broken dream
Shattered by reality
You try to change my mind
Instead think twice
And change the tune of your heart
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LiveTheDream
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2004-01-20 16:20:05]
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Re: Tune Of Your Heart
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 11:19:42 PM AEST
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mmm... your poem has put me quite in the reflective mood, funny how we let people affect us so, even if it is not hatred and only an unwanted unasked for opinion, their 'poison' can muchly get under our skin, i really like these lines as it hits home w/ someone i know,
"Your path has no future
Just a broken dream
Shattered by reality"
...i always tell ppl to take their own inventory, lol, my life being is as it is for a reason... very strong write, love it:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Tune Of Your Heart
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by Cobalt on
Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 11:21:02 PM AEST
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| Wow was that a powerful message. Let's just hope they take the advice to heart... Nicely written too. I liked. |
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