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Forget About It
Contributed by
crlepley
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Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 04:15:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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When i say i love you ...
I dont mean it.
When i say your pretty...
I dont mean it.
When i say your ugly...
Take me as sincere.
I dont love you.
I hate your looks.
You are ugly.
Like a fish on a hook.
All i want...
Is to say good bye.
But why are you still here?
I ask you why?
Today i am finished...
Tomorrow who cares.
Right now you really should just die.
Nobody wants you...
Nobody cares.
Why are you even still here?
When i say i love you...
I dont mean it
When i say i your pretty...
I dont mean it.
When i say your dead...
Take me as sincere.
But remember it is all in your head.
So just lie there lying in your bed...
Pondering on everything that i have said.
Awaken and feel the pain.
Listen to the rhythm of the rain.
Your image may still come across as a stain
Maybe you need to...
Stop the pain.
Why are you still here?
Listen to what i say.
Do you need help with it?
I can help you take care of it.
I guess this is goodbye
All's well... Just
Forget About It...
Copyright ©
crlepley
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2004-01-20 16:15:28] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Forget About It
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kie on
Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 10:14:35 PM AEST (User
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Wow, these words would be hard on a persons self esteem. Alot of anger expressed, I think.
Good write though. Kie |
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Re: Forget About It
(User Rating: 1 ) by blueheart on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 06:49:09 AM AEST (User
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Oh, the hatered struck me so hard. |
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Re: Forget About It
(User Rating: 1 ) by Cobalt on
Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 06:08:09 PM AEST (User
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This was an interesting write. Where you talking to yourself or someone else? It could be taken both ways. Nicely done though. |
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