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Questions
Contributed by
jonteD
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Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 03:10:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Who made the bullet that killed my son,
Where is the factory it was honed,
How many were made on that sad day,
Millions of bullets for millions of sons.
Who made the gun that shot my son,
How was it crafted with such skill,
Did they know what pain it would bring,
Why did they make the sights so true.
Who gave the order to shoot my son,
How loud was the order so barked,
Why in particular was his life cut short,
What harm had he done in his unlived life.
Who pulled the trigger to kill my son,
How proud did it make him feel,
Does he have a Mother who cares,
One bullet to kill my one son.
Where was the President when my son died?
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2004-01-20 15:10:20]
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Re: Questions
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by jme on
Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 03:26:09 PM AEST
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| Great job. Nicely written. |
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Re: Questions
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 05:10:13 PM AEST
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A write filled with emotion and grief. I thoughtt the poem was well formed and so sad to read the death of a son.
Best wishes in regards to your play writing. You'll do great.
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Re: Questions
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 05:11:46 PM AEST
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Touching poem, Jon...
BUT...WHO is this tutor, Jenni?? I thought I was the only Jenni!!!! :>)
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