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i wish i never called you a friend
Contributed by
lostinmyself
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Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 11:24:58 AM in AEST
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you took everything i loved away,
even though i trusted you,
even though people warned me to stay away,
i didnt listen,
i just listened to you.
you've taken my friends,
taken my life,
taken my happiness,
and taken my soul,
and im supposed to forgive and forget?
well, i say no.
No to everything youve done,
no to everything youve said,
no i wont listen,
no i wont forgive and forget.
You pulled me apart piece by piece,
you made me wish i was dead,
thats not someting you just forgive........
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Re: i wish i never called you a friend
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by LiveTheDream on
Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 11:40:26 AM AEST
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I know exactly how you feel. Recently ive been feeling fed up with someome i considered close and i wrote quite an angry poem about them. And you dont want to forgive and forget but sometimes you have to to move on...
Brillian write
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Re: i wish i never called you a friend
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 12:08:58 PM AEST
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A very good emotional expression.
Well done
Rakerman |
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Re: i wish i never called you a friend
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by jme on
Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 03:16:21 PM AEST
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| Good job. Great write. |
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Re: i wish i never called you a friend
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by hawaii06 on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 04:31:50 PM AEST
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| Well...I hope they learned their lesson and this was a very good poem...didn't seem rusty at all...Good job..Keep on writing... |
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Re: i wish i never called you a friend
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by Necromant on
Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 09:01:31 AM AEST
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Yeah good poem! I agree I had a friend once just like you've described and i totally agre with you! Great poem! Keep it up!
Anne :D |
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Re: i wish i never called you a friend
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by Cobalt on
Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 03:52:24 PM AEST
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| Wow did I like this and in my own way could relate. Very nicely done. |
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