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Unlight This Candle
Contributed by
jme
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Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 10:36:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Unlight this candle
That burns withing my soul
Replace it with bitter, ice, and cold
Left Alone
I'll get a cat, maybe 5
Unlight this candle
Remove passions from my lips
Let the cold come in
Creeping through the sheets
I hang on the windows for curtains
Unlight this candle
I'll eat from unclean plates
On my checkered tablecloth
Leave me alone with my cats
Copyright ©
jme
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2004-01-20 10:36:03]
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Re: Unlight This Candle
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by Manicmuze on
Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 12:51:14 PM AEST
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I like this... ya know, sometimes i think a cat would just be a whole lot easier anyway... :-)
Enjoyed your poem, very heartfelt and honest, nicely done.
~ Wendy |
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Re: Unlight This Candle
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 01:21:40 PM AEST
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I second, the first comment.
I think it might be easier...Enjoyed this one- Kie |
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Re: Unlight This Candle
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by Kittenfantastico on
Friday, 12th March 2004 @ 10:52:22 PM AEST
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| Ok breathtaking is my first comment. My 2nd? Gr8 gr8 gr8 |
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