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Good bye letter

Contributed by icryblacktearz on Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 09:37:33 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

You talk to me about suicide,
Then my life is what i describe,
The life you think is 'hard'
is what has left me scard,
i cant remember one happy time,
that the sun did shine,
my life was gonig great,
then you and my father had to mate,
you brought me into this world,
without a chocie or word,
you knew about his history,
and you always had to tell his story,
to make us try and love him,
it was like trying to make a light bulb dim,
we always pretened we cared,
that was until i dared,
to look him straight in the eyes,
and seek out all the lies,
about all the broken doors and bones,
the truth felt alot like a stone,
the cold hard truth about what we call father,
was nothing but a ***** it bother,
the stories about you hiding for you life,
cut me life a knife,
and made my arms swell and bleed,
my life was going nowhere, that was indeed,
So this poem isnt really anything,
except a goodbye letter to him,
no, not the guy named tim,
but to tell him with out you around,
im allowed to speak out loud,
about my thoughts and feelings,
you cant tell me how im feeling,
so this is a good bye,
for now this is my last ::sigh::

Copyright © icryblacktearz ... [ 2004-01-20 09:37:33]
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Re: Good bye letter (User Rating: 1 )
by desire on Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 01:51:58 PM AEST
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quite a powerful piece i would say...coming to terms with pain and letting go always is......slr

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