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to my everdearest friend

Contributed by hermoiii on Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 09:34:55 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

im feeling this pain
and im so much in vain
i cant trust another person
i cant love another friend
you made me lose my faith
all that was left is hate
why did you do this to me!
why did you leave me to break!
i am now shattered in this big body of water
i am carried away by the angry waves
i am drowning in the depth of hate
why did you let me fall in this pitch black state!
why didnt you help me!
why didint you catch me!
why did you let me leave!
how could you not forgive
a wrong that i have forever regretted as i live!
how could you throw it all away!
with everything we had, just gone in a day
and the worst thing that you ever did
was to replace me with a ******* freak
you know all the time, my anger for that guy
but still he was the one you choose to replace me with
and now i cant do anything about it
so, everytime i see you walking by with him along your side
all i feel is guilt and cry over my spilled milk
and then i bow my head and walk away from such myriad grief
i dont wanna see your face again!
i'll just accept my DEFEAT!
THANK YOU MY FRIEND!
i'll make sure that you'll never ever exist
and in my mind may you R.I.P.!
goodbye *****!
burn in hell YOU WITCH!

Copyright © hermoiii ... [ 2004-01-20 09:34:55]
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Re: to my everdearest friend (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 10:05:19 AM AEST
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wow, thats really angry, i know how you feel i havent had the best luck with friends in the past either. this is a really good write, full of emotion, keep up the good work!

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