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Two runaways in love chased by the breeze
Contributed by
loopylou
on
Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 07:34:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The rains falling down hard and steady
plummeting into the night and bouncing painfully hard against the pavement
the grey clouds luminate the dark sky
giving hope of a brighter day
but the coldness of the wind blows all hope away....
two runaways in love run with the breeze
with bags apon their weak backs carrying their only possessions
the only noise they make is the comforting lover's sighs to let each other know their coping
they run to irland for a secret marriage
known to the lover's a baby the young girl carries....
finally the two lay down for rest
huddle together for warmth
they feel each others body close
as they touch
to run away for any other reason but love would never be enough...
they both fall asleep
into a deep dream
a hot place
with sparkling streams...
their they sleep
whlist the sky spits on their cold faces
and their uncontious bodies chatter together in the same rhythm
until they slowly stop
the vapour fails to come out from their sleepless mouths
later on that day
the news papers headlines say
"two runaways in love with the breeze die a cold,cold death they freeze"
suddenly the world looks at these vagrents in a different light
it says such a pity to happen to such young live's...
Copyright ©
loopylou
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2004-01-20 07:34:50]
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Re: Two runaways in love chased by the breeze
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 01:19:19 PM AEST
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| What a unique poem you have written loopylou. I thought the story was very good and I read it a couple of times. Kie |
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Re: Two runaways in love chased by the breeze
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 03:49:51 PM AEST
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very life like and enjoyable to read
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Re: Two runaways in love chased by the breeze
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by Cobalt on
Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 01:42:21 PM AEST
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| Very sad... A very good write though. I like the idea behind the end with what was said... I really liked this one. |
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