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BLOODY RAVEN
Contributed by
Kittie
on
Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 05:59:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Bloody Raven
With your head so high
What is this wisdom you p.o.s.s.e.s.s?
Please show me your power
Bloody Raven
With blood stained feathers
Why are you hurting so?
We can make them sorry
Bloody Raven
With eyes as black as night
Why is your heart so cold?
You can cry to me
Bloody Raven
With tears streaming
What have they done to you?
I will protect you
Bloody Raven
WIth b/r/o/k/e/n wings
Where have you come f r o m?
You have fallen into my heart
Copyright ©
Kittie
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2004-01-20 05:59:51]
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Re: BLOODY RAVEN
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by afraid_of_fear on
Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 10:22:02 AM AEST
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this is amazing, i love the ending..
charlotte x_x_x |
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Re: BLOODY RAVEN
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 01:31:58 PM AEST
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| this was dark, sad, yet uplifting in the end... |
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Re: BLOODY RAVEN
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by Cobalt on
Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 01:17:16 PM AEST
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| This was good. I don't think I understood it but that didn't stop me from liking this. Nice. |
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