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My Last Chance
Contributed by
MajesticPoet
on
Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 05:32:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I look to you
As you cry my name
The pain this will cause
Leaves only me to blame.
Your hunger builds
You have not yet fed
If you fade from me now
I’ll forever wish I were dead.
One more chance
Is what I’ve got
I’ll bring you fresh love
Never to second guess or second thought.
You smile as I watch
Your pain now subsides
My heart swells with love
For the eternity in your eyes.
Copyright ©
MajesticPoet
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2004-01-20 05:32:32]
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Re: My Last Chance
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by Kittie on
Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 06:19:50 AM AEST
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((...AwWwW...)) i like so sweeet!! bootifulz =P~
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Kittie
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LaLaLa day dreaming now lol ;o) great write !! |
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Re: My Last Chance
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by Cobalt on
Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 01:15:57 PM AEST
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| Very nicely done. I like the last stanza alot. Ecspecially the eternity in your eyes thing. It was really good. The second stanza was really powerful as well. |
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