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addiction
Contributed by
netweight23oz
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Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 10:52:57 PM in AEST
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I die bit by bit every day
As I watch pieces of me fade away
Pools of maroon lie on the floor
Addiction shows its face on more
A sudden rush, the once thing I need
To make all my ugly truths be seen
As I look at myself and wish to burn
And for my knife again I yearn
This is all to familiar to me
Through these tears I can no longer see
This inner torment no one understands
Im left alone with nothing in my hands
And I can’t imagine other emotions
As mine tie me down and end all my motion
Deliriously I then go and lay
Until I give in to addiction another day…
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Re: addiction
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 11:02:36 PM AEST
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A well written poem on such a delicate subject...great write...Glad you're over it...
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Re: addiction
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 12:12:04 AM AEST
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| great expression and full of the images whilst living an addiction, i think your poem will help someone, im happy you are doing better now, addiction bites.. hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: addiction
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 12:40:31 AM AEST
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a touch of sadness a touch of hope. Im glad that your doing better now. I wont tell you I understand this form of addition because I dont but I will say Im here if you need me Im a pm away.
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Re: addiction
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 02:07:43 AM AEST
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| well that was a wee bit depressing.... but i see it in alot of people, the need to self destruct... the night can be a long cold and dark place.... but for those with eyes to see there are lights burning ever so bright... we must cultivate the joys in our lives... |
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Re: addiction
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 02:23:45 AM AEST
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wow this is a wonderful write on self abuse.. I know how you feel . I used to cut myself to take away my inner pain.. its a hard thing to deal with and its very addicting.. but it does make you forget the pain that lies within for a little while.. awesome job.. so sad
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Re: addiction
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by deathdrop on
Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 09:42:54 AM AEST
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| i'm deathdrop, the fell you feel, i feel it too... they may have locked me away for my self harm... then, again, i was only 12. |
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