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suffocating
Contributed by
netweight23oz
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Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 10:51:41 PM in AEST
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I can’t breathe
Through this thick cloud of gas
That the came from the mouth of those lies
And your subtle apathy for my pain
Is none to reassuring to what I feel
And you said you loved me
Yet I’m abandoned in this endless spiral
Of my agony and your false empathy
I keep reassuring myself that I believe you
But then its all to plain to see
That my tears and hopes are in vain
But I cant find the strength to pull myself away
The bittersweet fragrance of your words
Surrounds me, ever so delicately
And smothers me, filling my lungs with your name
As your mood drops like a guillotine
Cutting away my sweet selfish dreams
Copyright ©
netweight23oz
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2004-01-19 22:51:41]
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Re: suffocating
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 02:09:54 AM AEST
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Re: suffocating
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 02:25:40 AM AEST
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wow greatly expressed ! you can feel the pain in this.. sometimes it sucks when people are pretending to care when they don't.. I really enjoyed reading this awesome job
JENNA |
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