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Friend
Contributed by
forever_lonely
on
Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 08:42:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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For a thousand tears i have cried
To find in you i do confide
A million stars light the way
For in m heart you will stay
A strong soul, within you keep
I hurt so much to see you weep
You are my friend, the best of all
You know ill catch you when you fall
Reflective light in beauty its seeks
I could listen and read for weeks
Your memory close, to keep will i
Never leave me, never say bye
For to lose you i would not cope
I would die a death and lose all hope
Ill sing a lullaby so sweet
So you and your dreams do meet
Goodnight sweet eyes for now i go
Watching close so dreams be so
Your a star so bright and blue
Please never stop being you
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forever_lonely
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2004-01-19 20:42:15] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Friend
(User Rating: 1 ) by fallen_eyes on
Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 08:44:58 PM AEST (User
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luke thats such a fab poem. My fav i think! its like mine was a question and urs the answer, cuz they link so well. thank you luke. Ur definately getting a big hug for this xxx |
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Re: Friend
(User Rating: 1 ) by faith_my_eyes on
Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 09:27:23 PM AEST (User
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what a wonderful dedication to your friend. they are blessed to have someone who is as thankful for their presence in a person's life life as you. God bless |
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Re: Friend
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jacktripper on
Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 09:39:40 PM AEST (User
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What a great friend you are writting such a dedication. Need anymore freinds...j/k It was very moving the end kinda lost me. But I think it was an inside thought for private ears only. Well good poem and very good friend. |
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Re: Friend
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 10:44:52 PM AEST (User
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Such a beautiful and touching write...you two are so lucky...
Jenni |
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Re: Friend
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 02:16:14 AM AEST (User
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it's nice to have friends... |
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Re: Friend
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 06:33:54 AM AEST (User
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beautiful one of your best writes i think
Shari |
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Re: Friend
(User Rating: 1 ) by blueheart on
Thursday, 29th January 2004 @ 12:28:22 AM AEST (User
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It's nice to have a good friend who cares. Lovely poem here. Touching and heartfelt. |
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Re: Friend
(User Rating: 1 ) by Cobalt on
Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 12:33:56 AM AEST (User
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This was very nice and sweet. I hope they appreciate this and you. Nicely done. |
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