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Closed Eyes
Contributed by
desi
on
Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 07:44:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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My world is falling apart.
So what else is new?
When I close my eyes...
I see you.
It's better now,
Because I see you.
Unfortunately, my eyes open again.
The Fantasy is gone.
My Love for you cannot last.
You do not love me back.
But with closed eyes,
I love you more,
And you love me too.
We stand in the rain,
Holding each other,
Kissing deeply.
This will never happen.
You have a significant other.
I'm lost and alone without you.
It's thundering,
Clouds rolling.
We don't care,
As long as we have each other.
This is my dream with closed eyes.
We stay this way for eternity.
I love you.
Why can't you understand?
We will never be together,
Except in my Closed Eyes,
Copyright ©
desi
... [
2004-01-19 19:44:09]
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Re: Closed Eyes
(User Rating: 1 )
by Mouth on
Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 08:09:39 PM AEST
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Nicely written. It's a good dream to have. Hope it all works out. Keep writing your dreams and maybe they will come true:)
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Re: Closed Eyes
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 10:21:31 PM AEST
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Absolutely wonderful write.... one with which I can identify...
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