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HER(sonnet 1)
Contributed by
ckyhim666
on
Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 06:13:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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When I see her I cannot stand to breathe
Its like my heart has stopped when she’s not here
When she comes in the room I have to leave
If she cant be with me at least be near
When I think about her I shed a tear
Life feels like I am ripping out my eyes
To live without her I can only fear
If I said I don’t care it is all lies
Telling me to let her go would be wise
Being without her will drive me to kill
Though you don’t show it I can hear your cries
I have realized you are just a thrill
For this is my story and this is my ill
To rid me of this I would need a pill
Copyright ©
ckyhim666
... [
2004-01-19 18:13:21]
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Re: HER(sonnet 1)
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by MissLee on
Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 06:19:14 PM AEST
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| Welcome, good job I liked it, people don't comment too often on new writers, it takes a while. I have been here a bit and still don't get many comments. |
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Re: HER(sonnet 1)
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 06:21:00 PM AEST
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Allow me to welcome you to
Your_Poetry.Com... the best poetry site on the net....
This is an excellent sonnet..I enjoyed reading it very much. Hope to see more here...
Jenni |
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Re: HER(sonnet 1)
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by raypower on
Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 06:40:43 PM AEST
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| This poem is a good poem which suits a lament for desired friendship and broken relation |
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