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Untitled
Contributed by
Angelica
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Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 02:44:48 PM in AEST
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Fill me with your ugliness, your anger wrapped inside.
Tell of the crazy rules that you were made abide.
Fill me with an emotion, but make it one that's real.
Fill me with your enery so I'll know what you feel.
Then banish me from all your thoughts, lock me in a cage.
Hurt me, beat me, murder me, just fill me up with rage.
And when I cry for mercy tell me it's just the first stage.
Write me up a poem and then rip up the whole page.
Let me cry, let me die and tell them you don't care.
When you're invited to my funeral say you won't be there.
Act like life's a simple game of truth or dare.
If so, then dare to tell your enemy the truth.
Fight me hair for hair, fight me tooth for tooth.
Then when we're both lying, bleeding on the ground.
Reach over to me, pick me up, but never make a sound.
Then I will tell you secrets of the treasure you have found.
Then our knowledge of each other will be of the most profound.
Copyright ©
Angelica
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2004-01-19 14:44:48]
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Re: Untitled
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by lonesomerose on
Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 02:58:42 PM AEST
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great job
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Re: Untitled
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by Lia on
Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 03:01:05 PM AEST
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| I like the vibe with this but not really sure what it's about...good though |
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Re: Untitled
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by Angelica on
Friday, 30th January 2004 @ 01:33:36 PM AEST
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| Thanks for your comments. This poem is mostly about the battle that one must go through in order to form a strong relationship, where each person knows the others thoughts and feelings. |
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Re: Untitled
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by jeanie on
Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 07:04:00 AM AEST
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wow, very good one! :D
I like the speech coming out from the mind, hard to be understood...but it's not the point, to understand the words....the impression which it evokes is the main aim, it's how also me usually writes ;) and that you reached so damn well, great job :D
jeanie |
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Re: Untitled
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by Cobalt on
Friday, 6th February 2004 @ 12:35:01 PM AEST
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| Wow... I don't really know what to think. It was a good write but that was a lot of emotion. Very well done. |
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