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One Silky Kiss
Contributed by
Mick_Puttock
on
Monday, 2nd September 2002 @ 06:45:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
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It’s not only that, I think of you
For when I do, I see your face too
And it’s not only that, I dream of you
And want you with me, for all time too…
I look at the stars, up in the night skies
It reminds me of, the sparkle in your eyes
I look at the flowers, that blossom in spring
And think of the beauty, to my life that you bring…
And how do I tell you, about the tremendous fright
I got upon that, very fateful night
That night we went out, just you and me
That night I fell deeply, in love with thee…
For it’s not only that, this is so true
For I love you with, my whole life too
You have taken, my heart, my soul
And without you now, I just don’t feel whole…
Now what would you say, if I put it like this
That I long for, from you; just one silky kiss
Or what would you say, if I wanted so much
Just to be near you, to feel your soft touch…
Or would you hate me, if I now asked you
For one loving cuddle, a dream come so true
So when you read this, please think of me
And know just how much, I’m in love with thee
Mick Puttock
Copyright ©
Mick_Puttock
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2002-09-02 06:45:02]
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Re: One Silky Kiss
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 2nd September 2002 @ 06:59:26 AM AEST
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I enjoyed your "one silky kiss'" the first time....and still do today!!!
(((hugs)))
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Re: One Silky Kiss
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 2nd September 2002 @ 07:20:54 AM AEST
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| Aww! |
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Re: One Silky Kiss
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 2nd September 2002 @ 08:10:38 AM AEST
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| it's like I said today, "I envy the woman!" ;) |
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Re: One Silky Kiss
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by emystar on
Monday, 2nd September 2002 @ 10:23:35 AM AEST
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Hi Mick,
Awesome write and I know the feeling or did once.....Very cute!!!!!
Luv it!!!!
PEACE, LUV, ONE LITTLE kISS,
emy |
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Re: One Silky Kiss
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by Mystery_Girl on
Monday, 2nd September 2002 @ 01:23:59 PM AEST
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| Wow Mick this is so nice and lucky girl..Hope children are all fine.....tanya...:-) |
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Re: One Silky Kiss
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by ginsdance on
Monday, 2nd September 2002 @ 01:36:42 PM AEST
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I hope that she figures out how much you are in love with her Mick! This is a beautiful poem!
*Ginsdance* |
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Re: One Silky Kiss
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by Rose on
Tuesday, 3rd September 2002 @ 05:37:43 AM AEST
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| I hope she does too, know your feelings, Mick. she is one lucky gal. A very touching write. Always, Amber Rose :) |
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Re: One Silky Kiss
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by MisterRight on
Tuesday, 3rd September 2002 @ 12:54:56 PM AEST
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Beautiful write Mick. She must be a great gal.
Curtis |
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Re: One Silky Kiss
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by Poetess730 on
Thursday, 5th September 2002 @ 06:50:33 AM AEST
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| how so very romantic...such sadness we feel when we are without that one that has stolen our hearts... excellent write |
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Re: One Silky Kiss
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by Rage on
Saturday, 12th October 2002 @ 08:55:55 AM AEST
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| Aw, brings that tingly feeling inside. Great write, Mick! |
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Re: One Silky Kiss
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by OreO on
Monday, 11th November 2002 @ 02:46:48 PM AEST
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Lucky girl she would be i agree
Beautiful write, brought tears to my eyes
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: One Silky Kiss
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by sweetolbaby on
Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 03:26:00 AM AEST
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| this poem is very beautiful! a very good write! |
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Re: One Silky Kiss
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by Sarah22 on
Sunday, 8th December 2002 @ 04:56:35 PM AEST
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im gald i stopped
here to read poem
it was worth the stop. |
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Re: One Silky Kiss
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by Merry on
Sunday, 5th October 2003 @ 08:25:38 AM AEST
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such a romantic write - such a sweet thought and so very charmingly written
merry |
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Re: One Silky Kiss
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by Former_Member on
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a brilliant poem, especially the penultimate stanza, which is a stunner. you convey yourself with such eloquence, this poem was a joy to read.
-phil |
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