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All Alone
Contributed by
jonbalser
on
Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 12:31:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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The doors close fast
lock tight as a bolt
your stuck inside
with nothing but thoughts
Your screaming for help
louder and louder you scream
no one is coming
your still left alone
Your going crazy inside
thinkin the worst yellin to die
fillin worthless inside
Your anger comes out
you bust through the door
screaming at the top of your lungs
Outside the door is empty
no one is around you yell once more
Still no one comes your all alone
so what you gonna do
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jonbalser
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2004-01-19 12:31:04]
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Re: All Alone
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by JenimaeMalinaHaloisi on
Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 12:33:04 PM AEST
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Good poem dear
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Re: All Alone
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by Cobalt on
Friday, 6th February 2004 @ 10:29:21 AM AEST
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| This was an interesting write. It was kinda a mixed emotion thing. Well done though. |
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