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My letter

Contributed by forever_lonely on Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 12:23:16 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



I cant feel you, you left me so
Theres so many things you need to know
Now you question who i am...
So i question who i am inside
Now i have nothing left to hide
This is my letter...

I cant breathe, im lost for breath
My only comfort, this closing death
Just give me time...
I just cant find the right words to say
Of how you killed me, that final day
This is my letter...

I'm caught up in your broken truth
Just look around your see the proof
I dont want to hate you...
Truth surpassing that with which truth will say
Its just so hard, im so afraid
This is my letter...

I lost a friend so close to me
There nothing left for me to be
I'll leave you now..
Dont cry for me, for this theres no worth
My life was a failure from the beggining of birth
This is my final letter...

Goodbye to all, a farewell your see
Not to long, for the extinction of me
Im closing the deal...
No tear to be shed, at the news so sad
Because you know your the one that drove me mad
This is my letter...





Copyright © forever_lonely ... [ 2004-01-19 12:23:16]
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Re: My letter (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 03:20:22 PM AEST
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I like the way you write. You reach into your soul and lay it out. It really touches me deeply. I have written so many letters similiar to this and writing has been my outlet in the worst of times. You write remarkable, feeling poetry.

Kie


Re: My letter (User Rating: 1 )
by Empty_Soul on Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 05:47:12 PM AEST
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Great poem luke, its funny i've jus posted a suicide poem an then I read urs an find out its about suicide, hmm we need help lol. for some reason i couldnt find the suicide poetry topic so i stuck mine under sad. Really like the style u've used here, when u told me how u had done it I was interested, still cant remember what its called, lol. oh well, look forward to your next write, love this one, one of my favourites.

keep of fighting
never stop writing

john (luv ya mate!! :-) )


Re: My letter (User Rating: 1 )
by fallen_eyes on Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 07:19:46 PM AEST
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I love your work luke, always have since the first time you ever showed me one of your poems. I can never say your poems have got worse cuz I know for a fact they only ever get better. I really do like this poem.
luv ya always mate xx


Re: My letter (User Rating: 1 )
by Vitreous_Soul on Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 07:56:40 AM AEST
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This is so passionate and inspired. If only I could count the times i've felt this way.

Great theme, impeccable flow, loved the rhyme scheme. Your talent really shined through in this write.

Truly,
-V.S.


Re: My letter (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Friday, 6th February 2004 @ 10:27:16 AM AEST
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Nicely done. This was very well written.


Re: My letter (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 03:40:01 AM AEST
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amazing, well done




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