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Daybreak
Contributed by
manicmuze
on
Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 09:18:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Imagine
Daybreak
Webbed through the room
Us, spooned
In a queen size bed
Your breath
Upon my neck
The quiet of morning
Light pouring in
A stirring, a ripple
Under the sheets
Our skin
Warm from the heat
Of each other
Under the covers
Where we sleep
Curled and silent
As first whispers of day
Gently nudge us
You pull me closer
With your subconscious
Into your breathing
Into sunup
And the beginnings of
Knowing love
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manicmuze
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2004-01-19 09:18:07]
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Re: Daybreak
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by whisper-of-night on
Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 09:47:10 AM AEST
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Great poem! You capture youself a fan here! ^_^ I find most of your poems always end with a wonderful punch lines, so is this one-
' You pull me closer
With your subconscious
Into your breathing
Into sunup
And the beginnings of
Knowing love'
Mmmmmm......... nicccce.......
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Re: Daybreak
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 11:51:19 AM AEST
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This reminds me of Romeo and Juliet--
"Look, love, what envious streaks
do lace the severing sky"
(atleast I think that's how it goes....lol)
That whole conversation..... just reminds me of that......
Beautiful...... as usual =)
Love,
Ellen
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Re: Daybreak
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by DreamWeaver on
Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 05:36:32 AM AEST
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| Aaah such beautiful images ... delightfully written ... Jan |
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