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Wishes
Contributed by
teenageemogirl
on
Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 12:26:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I wish I could wallow
My sorrows at the bottom of a bottle
A glimmer of hope with each swallow
Or have a needle to stick
Through each bleeding vein
To temporarily numb the pain
Or for a friend for all seasons
Who can see past the reasons
I'm miserable inside
I wish God would listen
As my eyes glisten
While I contemplate suicide
I wish my mother would
Understand the hurt in what she can say
I wish my mother could see
Her little girl dying slowly each day
I wish I wasn't alone
I wish this wasn't my life
I wish that my arm
Would stop listening to my knife
I wish someone knew how I felt
I wish someone knew this pain
I wish deep down inside my soul
I thought I had something to gain
These wishes have all fallen
Upon deaf ears I cry
These wishes never came to life
And in return I die
My heart it still beats
And my lungs still breathe in air
But my soul has died on this night
A soul imprisoned by a life unfair
And so I shut my eyes to sleep
And make a last wish to God up high
My Lord, I ask of you nothing more
Please, just let me die.
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teenageemogirl
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2004-01-19 00:26:14]
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Re: Wishes
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by emystar on
Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 12:50:23 AM AEST
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This is heart wrenching!
Come be my little girl.
HUUUUUGGGGSSSSS-n-bushuls full of LLLLUUUUVV,
emystar@msn.com |
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Re: Wishes
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 02:23:08 AM AEST
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| .. i cant be your parent type figure... but if you need a friend.... get at me... |
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Re: Wishes
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 07:53:26 AM AEST
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this is so sad but wonderfully written.. i can sense your pain through this..
afraid_of_fear
x_x_x |
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Re: Wishes
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by TheSpiritx on
Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 03:18:06 PM AEST
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Beautifully written. It's a shame that I can relate to this poem - I've suffered those times when you feel you can't accomplish anything and that you just are worth just as much.
Fortunately, I have found reassurance of life in student organizations in my school. Somewhere I belong and people I can relate to who are supportive of me.
Thank you for posting this poem. |
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Re: Wishes
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by InnerBeautyQueen on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 12:52:45 AM AEST
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| this is a really good poem. hugs 4 u |
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