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CUT,BLEED,TEAR,SPIT
Contributed by
Kittie
on
Sunday, 18th January 2004 @ 11:16:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Silent darkeness in my dead existance
Evil beauty
Triumphant death
Cut it with a knife
Make it bleed
Tear it up
Spit it out
I let you believe a lie
Betrayl
Deception
Manipulation
Cut it with a knife
Make it bleed
Tear it up
Spit it out
I ask of you
I've lead a path of destruction
End me now
The sun is gone from my eyes
See the darkness
Pain
Cut it with a knife
Make it bleed
Tear it up
Spit it out
Stop the pain
Kill the pain
No more niave hope to live
Only reality based death
Bliss in ignorance
Pain in the truth
Cut it with a knife
Make it bleed
Tear it up
Spit it out
Look into the mists of contradiction
You shall see my face
I loathe this
Myself
Epiphany
But no more light
Cut it with a knife
Make it bleed
Tear it up
Spit it out
Evil instinct
Destroy
Know this
For now I must go
Pain
Must stop the pain
Cut it with a knife
Make it bleed
Tear it up
Spit it out
Just spit it out
End me
Or I will end myself
No life
In my inconsistent heart
End it
End me now
Copyright ©
Kittie
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2004-01-18 23:16:32]
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Re: CUT,BLEED,TEAR,SPIT
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by thegurl on
Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 05:32:14 PM AEST
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Basically an outlet or way to stop the pain you feel inside, the way of death, america's best friend.
Great write, expressive, rather sad but good nonetheless.
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Re: CUT,BLEED,TEAR,SPIT
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by afraid_of_fear on
Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 10:27:51 AM AEST
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This is great, love the repetition.. your words are so very powerful..
charlotte x_x_x |
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Re: CUT,BLEED,TEAR,SPIT
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 01:34:40 PM AEST
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| usually repetition will make me stop reading something... but the subject matter was all in grossing... |
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Re: CUT,BLEED,TEAR,SPIT
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by Cobalt on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 01:37:02 PM AEST
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| For some reason reading this I got the image of a snake eating itself... I really enjoyed this one too. Very dark. |
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