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Buzz Around You
Contributed by
ruby1987
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Sunday, 18th January 2004 @ 11:15:19 AM in AEST
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oops
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The colours,
Have been sucked out,
Like the love out if my life
Lonely as a bee,
I buzz around you,
To find I have nowhere,
That I have no one,
I buzz around still in hope of new,
In hope of you
I dream,
But I know I dream too much,
I know I cannot change you for me,
And still,
I reach for what I know I can’t have
Burnt from trying to touch you,
I still buzz around you,
Flapping my wings full of smoke,
Still in hope of new,
In hope of you
Copyright ©
ruby1987
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2004-01-18 11:15:19]
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Re: Buzz Around You
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 18th January 2004 @ 06:53:53 PM AEST
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Lovely analogy.....
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Re: Buzz Around You
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by Cobalt on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 02:08:48 AM AEST
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| This was a good analogy. This was nicely done. |
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Re: Buzz Around You
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 11:51:11 AM AEST
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loved the bee thing, that's a song isn't it? bee thing you make my heart sting! thats got to be the worse joke on YPDC, anyway good poem!
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