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PASSION INSIDE
Contributed by
sweetangeluk
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Sunday, 18th January 2004 @ 09:33:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Silken sheets laid on the bed
Scattered rose petals are spread
Candle light glowing across the room
The intoxicating aroma of perfume
Your skin takes on an angelic glow
In the lustrous light from head to toe
The velvet luxury of touch lingers on
Displaying affection, soft like chiffon
Love, romance, devotion and such purity
Makes one feel a sense of security
The magical feeling of fire burning inside
The passion flowing like a rising tide
Gentle murmurs of love, fiery tongues explode
Kisses like nectar released our feelings, implode
"Can you breath my love" darling inhale deep
This is not a dream please do not weep
Stroking kissing caressing come taste my desire
Share with me your fantasies let them transpire
Your thoughts are now so wicked, burned with tears
Listen to the music eyes closed, music of the spheres
Our bodies become one such an urgent need
Moaning purring weeping, enter me I plead
Moving closer you enter that forbidden place
With each passionate thrust we embrace
Hearts beat with passion no time to slow down
Gasping for air feeling like we could drown
Savouring each moment wanting more
Desires fulfilled as one with my paramour
Love Angelxxx
Copyright ©
sweetangeluk
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Re: PASSION INSIDE
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by Jacktripper on
Sunday, 18th January 2004 @ 10:17:35 AM AEST
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| The last two verses are the best you capture the moment eloquently. The set up is nice romantic very loving and caring. It seems a loss of virginity? Or a romantic night? However to get your reader better it should have more hesitance not ready a scared mind. If passion is a burst of uncontrollable feelings then love is romance? So a suggestion would be to keep on the passion and not so much the romance. You have a gift you can tell the story good job. |
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Re: PASSION INSIDE
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 18th January 2004 @ 03:17:40 PM AEST
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| ~:*beautiful*:~ hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: PASSION INSIDE
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by Chadene_Gillespie on
Sunday, 18th January 2004 @ 03:22:50 PM AEST
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| great write keep up the good work |
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Re: PASSION INSIDE
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by Kie on
Sunday, 18th January 2004 @ 05:37:30 PM AEST
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Beautiful, romantic, passionate so well written. It's a really fantastic poem.
Kie |
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Re: PASSION INSIDE
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by sweetangeluk on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 01:32:19 PM AEST
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Thank you all for your comments i truly appreciate you taking time to read my poems
Thank you so much
love Sweet Angelxxxxxxxxxx |
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Re: PASSION INSIDE
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by PumpkinPie on
Friday, 23rd January 2004 @ 03:25:04 PM AEST
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Oh My God !!! This poem is EXACTLY what I was looking for...passion is such a strong emotion isn't it ?It makes you completely blind and addicted....I can relate to what you write in it,makes me dream of myself and the one I love !.......This was verrry sensual without being vulgar,and nicely expressed !For a while there I was somewhere else.I especially liked the 3 last paragraphs,actually they were all excellent !!!Excellent write,loved it to it's fullest,please oh please post more !!!
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Re: PASSION INSIDE
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by Cobalt on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 02:04:47 AM AEST
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| Hey thats a major part of one of my fantasies. I wish people would stop doing that lol. Very very very nicely written. I think a cold shower is in order. |
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Re: PASSION INSIDE
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 10:51:30 PM AEST
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Awesome write....you have such a gift for these passionate writes.... You do it with such class!!
Jenni |
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Re: PASSION INSIDE
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by FleurdeSang on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 04:08:58 PM AEST
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Sweetangel, you weave words that speak my emotions so beautifully and eloquently! Such splendor! Such passion! Such love! Truly magnificent! Dazzling till the very end! I love this! Show me your talented ways, dear angel! lol. Thank you for sharing this enchanting masterpiece! It shall forever be etched in my fevered mind... How I yearn for someone to share these feelings with me... A solemn sigh escapes my lips, wishing this write will go on forever... You have much talent, Sweetangeluk. All my love!
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