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If I Had Known
Contributed by
eternal_sorrows
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Sunday, 18th January 2004 @ 06:13:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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If I Had Known
I often think of yesteryear's
yet, reality confirms my fears.
If I had only known it was our last day
I would have asked you to please stay.
By your side I would have been
sharing memories of days when.
We would share some laughs and shed some tears
counting blessing for our years.
Gentle touches, hearts which beat
precious moments our souls to keep.
Your look, your smell, your sweet taste
not one "I love you" would we waste.
I'd hold you close, as close could be
with your warmth embracing me.
If I had only known it was our last day
I would have asked to you please stay.
Yes, I often think of yesteryear's
yet, reality confirms my fears.
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2004-01-18 06:13:32]
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Re: If I Had Known
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 18th January 2004 @ 07:10:08 AM AEST
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| im sorry for your loss, your not alone, i lost my husband too, years ago, and still feel like you do sometimes, left me alone with 3 young kids, course he didnt want to die, if i could just talk with him for 5 minutes... very beautiful poem:) much love and a big hug, nessa |
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Re: If I Had Known
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 18th January 2004 @ 08:43:28 AM AEST
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| I don't think I can really relate to your poem, but i can see their is alot of emotion in the poem. i hope everything works out. xx |
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Re: If I Had Known
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by loopylou on
Sunday, 18th January 2004 @ 09:07:43 AM AEST
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| this is wonderfley well written i like all the emotion in it. you have a great tallent and a strong charactor and obviously a strong heart....but this poem was so sad im sorry for your loss it you really made me appreciate what ive got.....thanks.....best wishes |
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