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Thorns of a Rose
Contributed by
Mouth
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Sunday, 18th January 2004 @ 03:05:43 AM in AEST
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Life is but thorns of a rose
It will cut your hand
Shall you try to grasp it's beauty.
The more you touch,
The more you bleed
Sweet drops of crimson pearls
Adorned on petals soft as clouds
Worn like battlefeild scars
Carrying the burden heavy as pride.
Life is but thorn of a rose-
The more you touch
The more you bleed,
The more you love
The more you hurt....
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Mouth
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2004-01-18 03:05:43]
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Re: Thorns of a Rose
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 18th January 2004 @ 04:09:12 AM AEST
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| ~:*true*:~ hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Thorns of a Rose
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by EternitysLyre on
Sunday, 18th January 2004 @ 04:48:34 AM AEST
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This is beautiful. You seem to digress a good way into the poem, and I lost the meaning along the way. In any case, it's definitely the work of a poet.
"To be a writer is to spend an hour looking for one word, but making one word more meaning than all the world."
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Re: Thorns of a Rose
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by pooja on
Sunday, 18th January 2004 @ 06:33:57 AM AEST
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Hi !
That was nice.
to the point .I especially like the comparison of wounds of a broken-heart and battle field scars.Nursing a freshly injured heart couldn't agree with you better .the more you love the more it hurts.. |
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Re: Thorns of a Rose
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by afraid_of_fear on
Sunday, 18th January 2004 @ 01:30:36 PM AEST
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this is so true.. i believe this so much and that you've written a beautiful poem reflecting this painful truth..
x_x_x |
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Re: Thorns of a Rose
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 18th January 2004 @ 06:17:22 PM AEST
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So lovely..and oh, so true....
Keep them coming..
Jenni |
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Re: Thorns of a Rose
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by Cobalt on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 01:37:51 AM AEST
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'The more you touch
The more you bleed,
The more you love
The more you hurt....'
I like how you did that part. It realy made the poem. It flowed very well and was really cool. |
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