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Oh' Lone Soul, Dare you Dream
Contributed by
Valerie_Pearson
on
Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 07:09:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Bare branches, the black crow is perched,
a lone soul wanders, no shadow to follow,
gazing into space without eyes,
the smell of death, lingering,
bliss approached, but thy has not gone,
wasting away within sunrise and sunset,
Oh' lonely cry, dare you dream,
wandering ...... , wandering ..... ,
Dark velvet midnight sky,
the moon cast ..... emerald green,
thristing for blood, wolves prowl,
Oh' lone soul, dare you dream,
thy has left hungry,
only to return a lost soul,
thy burnt body ...... coffin ..... urn,
ashes ....., ashes ......, fly onto crust earth,
grey and charred,
wandering not thru time,
only within lost hours,
and on the sill lies the two last raindrops,
or are they ?
Dare you dream?
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Valerie_Pearson
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Re: Oh' Lone Soul, Dare you Dream
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by Angelic_Demon on
Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 07:30:23 PM AEST
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Hey... This is really good. Dark, and captures the character's personality perfectly... (I got your e-mail. Thanks for the poem.) Really well written too.
Love ya,
Mars |
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Re: Oh' Lone Soul, Dare you Dream
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by shelby on
Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 09:34:10 PM AEST
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Im not used to seeing something like this from you Val but all I can say is wow it gave me chills and sat me right on the end of this chair!!Well done
michelle |
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Re: Oh' Lone Soul, Dare you Dream
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Sunday, 18th January 2004 @ 12:52:56 AM AEST
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Interesting read, cold and dark yet i found it had a mystical flow to it.
Excellent write you have put together there.
Keep it you have the talent to mesmerize. |
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Re: Oh' Lone Soul, Dare you Dream
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 18th January 2004 @ 03:51:51 AM AEST
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| excellent dark poem val, love it, love it! great ending too, made me sit back and wonder:) hugs n' love nessa |
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