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deep and true

Contributed by ladyfawn on Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 02:48:13 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



in these mountains are echos of our love
deep and true as birds fly quietly above
here as i wait for you to return to me

time stands still as i remember your kiss
pillowcase scent of you, i long the sweet bliss
days long and long... i wait to hear your voice

you should be here when i want to cry
bring me laughter, wipe a tear from my eye
let me melt in your arms and have peace

my love for you dear is most deep and true
im the woman who is faithful to you
so i sit and wait tonight under this moon

in these mountains are echos of our love
deep and true as stars shine quietly above
here as i wait for you to return to me...


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Copyright © ladyfawn ... [ 2004-01-17 14:48:13]
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Re: deep and true (User Rating: 1 )
by Stalkee on Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 02:54:40 PM AEST
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beautifully written...i cant even imagine how you're feeling right now. I liked this a lot, well done


Re: deep and true (User Rating: 1 )
by alecfernadez on Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 03:17:06 PM AEST
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wow this is really powerful, and lovely yet sad. And how did you do that cool thing at the end, with the symbols? It looks wiked. Anyway great poem and keep it up

Alec Fernandez


Re: deep and true (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 03:26:58 PM AEST
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AWwww...so beautiful..and so sweetly written.. I'm sure the time will fly fast till you're in his arms again..
Luv and hugs..
Jenni


Re: deep and true (User Rating: 1 )
by Merry on Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 03:28:35 PM AEST
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Oh Nessa - this is truly a beautiful and sentimental write. I hope everything turns out just the way you want it to.

Hugs
merry


Re: deep and true (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 03:31:32 PM AEST
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Oh how sweet! So romantic! Beautifully written! Wow I loved it! Great write!

Anne :D


Re: deep and true (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 04:38:14 PM AEST
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very beautiful...may his return to you be swift...and your joy know no bounds

Shari


Re: deep and true (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 07:04:43 PM AEST
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Words of longing ... oh, how I know what this feels like ... you paint a beautiful picture Nessa, I'm sure his arms will hold you soon ... Jan


Re: deep and true (User Rating: 1 )
by Valerie_Pearson on Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 09:21:17 PM AEST
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Oh, Nessa, your longing heart is heard over and over, and I'm sure he feels the same way, longing for you, take care , always Val


Re: deep and true (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 09:44:44 PM AEST
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Your words are so beautiful... they ring a little bell in my memory. Such a familiar feeling... there's not much worse than waiting... just sitting and waiting... not knowing... I might have to add that to my list of things that terrify me, lol. Waiting and not knowing and being powerless to make what you want done. I wish I could do something to help. Love and hugs,

~ Dee


Re: deep and true (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 09:52:35 PM AEST
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I feel your longing and I hope he returns to you very soon
michelle


Re: deep and true (User Rating: 1 )
by Wrybod on Sunday, 18th January 2004 @ 08:26:04 AM AEST
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Perfection as always

bob


Re: deep and true (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 12:53:35 PM AEST
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Wow... I hope he returns. Very nice write. This was very sweet.




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