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In Search Of My Love
Contributed by
wachumiri
on
Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 01:50:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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My heart it flies
Away from me
In search of my love
Across the sea
For it is life
That took me from her
Though some day I'll go back
I know for sure
There must be a reason
To love so deep
For my soul to mourn
My heart to weep
She is the one,
She gave life to this pen
And for her these words
From my heart burst open
And so I desire
To be with my love
My heavenly gem
My rose from Above
Copyright ©
wachumiri
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2004-01-17 13:50:03]
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Re: In Search Of My Love
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 02:41:46 PM AEST
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| ~:*beautiful!*:~ ...seems you and i are in the same boat with no oars as my love lives across the sea from me as well, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: In Search Of My Love
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by faith_my_eyes on
Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 07:32:49 PM AEST
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*sob* I know, I know.. little brother, my heart breaks for you!
CALL HER!
~Em |
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Re: In Search Of My Love
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by Cobalt on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 11:16:36 AM AEST
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| I really liked that last stanza. I just like the wording a helluva lot. Very nice write. Like I said before I hope you find a new muse man, or at least maybe she will come back.... |
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Re: In Search Of My Love
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by eatfresh22 on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 01:13:44 AM AEST
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What an intense love you have for her. I guess we should all be glad she inspired your writing...
~Carrie~ |
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Re: In Search Of My Love
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by anitajames on
Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 07:39:03 AM AEST
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This is beautiful, as the one who inspired it must also be.
Ann |
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