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Are Women Free
Contributed by
norm
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Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 11:43:26 AM in AEST
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Let's really see what's going on,
You girls are being fed a con,
THEY tell you now, you're way ahead,
Work, have kids and play in bed.
Look how far you've gone since THEN,
Educatate, you equal men,
You can have it all these days
And THEY prove it..many ways.
I tell you now, I tell you this,
There is a point that you could miss,
What isn't stressed, you aught to know,
Somewhere on earth, a woman's low.
Some women bow their heads to males,
And if they don't their head inpales,
Some women cover head to feet,
And if they don't then they'll be beat.
I tell you this, I tell you now,
If one woman's made to bow,
THEN, the way it looks to me,
There is no woman really FREE.
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Re: Are Women Free
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 11:50:39 AM AEST
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"Some women bow their heads to males,
And if they don't their head inpales,
Some women cover head to feet,
And if they don't then they'll be beat."
But what if some do it simply out of choice?
Are they still not free? |
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Re: Are Women Free
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 12:24:01 PM AEST
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| very true, very true, great poem and message norm, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Are Women Free
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by norm on
Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 12:40:44 PM AEST
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Answer to anonymous:
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A woman can choose to suicide,
Or kill her children then go hide,
or eat a cup of glass with glee,
Yes, she is judged to be quite FREE.
'tween you and me if this the case,
this woman is easy to abase,
She never learned that quality
Is really what makes a woman..FREE |
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Re: Are Women Free
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by shelby on
Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 02:43:15 PM AEST
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I must agree with you Norm.
michelle |
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Re: Are Women Free
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 03:13:52 PM AEST
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Interesting and insightful...
Jenni |
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Re: Are Women Free
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by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 03:23:49 PM AEST
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Dear Norm,
Very thought provoking poem!
But I can't answer without knowing this?
What are you talking about when you say FREE?
I'm from Wyoming where first woman were given voting sufferage! So you mean that kind?
Or are you specifically talking about FREEDOM as far as men are concerned?
What about men....are they free? I can't think of one single individual anywhere in this world that is free....from taxes, governments , even death etc. Freedom from Gravity? So many different examples....if you would please explain further in your wonderful poem, then I could more accurately answer in correct form!
Could you that please.
Thank you,
ConSue |
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Re: Are Women Free
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by Necromant on
Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 03:42:44 PM AEST
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Hmm thoughtful poem, I'd agree as well, women are said to be free but in reality we all know that some women still suffer from injustices. Very good written poem, it made me reflect about our situation in society.
Anne :D
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Re: Are Women Free
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 04:29:43 PM AEST
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| some men aren't free either... ever heard of society's where women can decide to have more than one husband... and the husbands must bow down to them? I forget the official word for it but there are such things... |
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Re: Are Women Free
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by Kie on
Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 05:42:15 PM AEST
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Well you definitely put a question in my mind and have given me thoughts to think on. Will men and women ever be equal everywhere? I dunno. Great poem Norm.
Kie |
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Re: Are Women Free
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by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on
Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 07:25:20 PM AEST
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Hi norm,
as a male i agree,
we must set our women free.
from a male point of view this is a true poem.
i think we should treat every one the same.
no matter what there gender.
very,very good. |
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Re: Are Women Free
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by jeanie on
Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 03:32:33 PM AEST
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Wow, I must say this was very well done, I liked it! :D
And it makes me think, yes, hm, the topic isn't my fav.....but I agree to your point. Hmm, but, if we can claim that "If one woman's made to bow,
THEN, the way it looks to me,
There is no woman really FREE"
doesnť it also mean that
as long as a man does live
there'll be need for us to give
a privilege that a right should be
to those who suffer silently
......?
jeanie |
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Re: Are Women Free
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by Cobalt on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 10:03:16 AM AEST
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| 'Tisn't a choice most of the time maybe you missed some of the stanza though so I forgive it. I liked this norm. You really aren't normal though. Lol. |
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