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BRUISED SOUL, WOUNDED HEART
Contributed by
emystar
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Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 06:10:42 AM in AEST
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She was a vibrant woman in control
where oh where did her spirit go?
She rocked the world with her song,
Where oh where has her joy gone?
She has a bruised soul, a wounded heart
He caused her pain from their start.
Friend, oh friend, see her now
She's found new ground to plow.
Walking away from tortured pain
Now she smiles thru life's rain.
When lightening crashes all around
Her spirit soars 'cause love she's found.
So listen up, my shattered friend
We're all survivers to the end.
Walk away from sordid, useless pain.
Get into life, smile again.
Written:6/16/95
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emystar
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2004-01-17 06:10:42]
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Re: BRUISED SOUL, WOUNDED HEART
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by venkat on
Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 06:37:09 AM AEST
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| Get into life smile again..the entire poem is beautiful.. this is one of your best. venkat |
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Re: BRUISED SOUL, WOUNDED HEART
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by ArdRi79 on
Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 01:50:09 AM AEST
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| This is a great piece of work, I like how you created an intimacy with the person then hsowed it could be done, it shines with truth and true beauty. |
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Re: BRUISED SOUL, WOUNDED HEART
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by ShadowDaughter on
Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 01:34:16 AM AEST
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I like that . . . especially the last stanza. There's a certain poignancy to this that just stabs at you-- "my shattered friend". Wow. Nice job!
--Nora |
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Re: BRUISED SOUL, WOUNDED HEART
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by Cobalt on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 01:43:58 AM AEST
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| Great write. Perfect message. I like how you wrote this out. Every line was just great. |
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