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D'yeux la rouille ainsi
Contributed by
Khosrow
on
Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 02:06:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
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D'yeux la rouille ainsi
Eyes so blight with fright once again you have sinned. What so wrong yet wrought such undue right and again not yet so blight.
Bodies entwined and niched as one, your's and mine, again your a slayer once more, forever sore for noir. Let us say today, nay not to my lay.
However with thy harp in hand, I must confess to sin, again I have lamented to be again. Sinners and kissers forever more, lust not your tasted sin.
Wicked your cool breath be against my cheek, the hue in your eye burns with dispassion untold in silken ambrosia.
Skin I feel untouched before, taut muscles ripple and liquid sighs I see sunder not. Again and again dzzled by your silver blood and icy breath.
Scarlet lips with honed eyes, your breast sighs with that sinful mirth, you irk wicked temptress, tresses fly high.
How again for once can I commit to sin when again, you break my hand. Thus again we hath tempted and thusly we have encompassed the windowed hell of sin.
Mon petit amoureux diabolique de péché, mortel encore à mon péché.
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Khosrow
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2004-01-17 02:06:26]
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Re: D'yeux la rouille ainsi
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by spiffyphil on
Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 02:29:58 AM AEST
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| Awesome, I love the ryhyme scheme and flow of this poem, great job with the vivid description of feeling. |
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Re: D'yeux la rouille ainsi
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by Mouth on
Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 02:40:00 AM AEST
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That I truly believe is the most beautiful poem I have ever read. Not everyone can make sin sound so, well tempting, haha. Outstanding write. I am curious, who inspired( or what) such a dramatic poem?
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Re: D'yeux la rouille ainsi
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by Khosrow on
Sunday, 1st February 2004 @ 02:54:30 PM AEST
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| A lover inspired it with simply her eyes. I am sad though, many of my poems are read but no one posts how they feel about them. :( |
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