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Tatoo'ed Teardrop
Contributed by
Valerie_Pearson
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Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 11:16:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Lost within these shadows,
stumbling upon stones,
reaching for emotions,
yet I'm left standing here alone,
On my cheek a tatoo'ed teardrop,
been there since she's been gone,
Morning has just broken,
a new day for me to breath,
I swore I wouldn't cry,
but my heart still knows to grieve,
She left three years a passin'
coldest day I knew,
crying out to hold her,
If others only knew,
This pain sometimes, exhausting,
I try to hide away,
my breath slowly leaving me,
the day she flew away,
I wish I knew an ending,
to this beautiful soul's young life,
but this pains become an aching,
I'll yearn for all my life,
I try to shed a smile,
to others that pass by,
but hapiness all ended,
when in life, I lose a child !
Copyright ©
Valerie_Pearson
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2004-01-16 23:16:07]
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Re: Tatoo'ed Teardrop
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 12:56:41 AM AEST
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| im almost cried reading this... the emotion... ooohhh.... good poem |
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Re: Tatoo'ed Teardrop
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by Angelic_Demon on
Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 01:05:59 AM AEST
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Aww... Val, I'd be crying right now if I wasn't so stubborn... *sniffs* Sometimes loosing someone that you love is hard, and you should never try to hold in your emotions... especially if it's one of your children.
This was really good... you're an amazing writer.
Blessed Be,
Mars |
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Re: Tatoo'ed Teardrop
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 01:09:43 AM AEST
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| awww (((((valerie))))) sweetie, my heart goes out to you! what a beautifully written poem from a loving mom who has gone through more than any should, honestly i dont know how you have lived through such unbearable loss, i know your arms ache to hold your allie, she was a beautiful girl, love you my dear friend, hugs, ever nessa xx |
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Re: Tatoo'ed Teardrop
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 06:23:01 PM AEST
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(((((Val)))) This is a pain that never goes away... I know..
Sad write..but beautifully written..
Luv and hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Tatoo'ed Teardrop
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by LOWMAN613 on
Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 07:06:58 PM AEST
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| omg YOU GOT ME CRYING AS ALWAYS! THIS WAS SO TOUCHING & SAD! VAL,I WISH I COULD GIVE YOU A HUG.cHRISTINA |
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Re: Tatoo'ed Teardrop
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by DreamWeaver on
Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 07:20:54 PM AEST
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| Dear Valerie, the greatest pain would be losing your child ... these words touched me so deeply, I can feel your loss so much ... the title is perfect - always a tear, never to fade ... hugs Jan |
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Re: Tatoo'ed Teardrop
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by emystar on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 05:45:45 AM AEST
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oh me friend, this is so sad. I can't begin to know how u feel. I'm so sorry for your loose.
luv, big ole huggs,
emy |
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