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Dad your love was unconditional ( Fathers Day)
Contributed by
Chester_England_White
on
Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 10:02:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
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When I was but seven one day
Mother was taken away
She went to heaven to stay
And we will meet again someday
This left Dad and I
For our loss we did cry
Dad he did try
To explain the reason why
But so young I still did cry
Someone came by one day
And told to Dad I will take your son away
Because with you he cannot stay
You are unable to take care of him day by day
My Dad said you had better stay away
And not try to take my son I pray
I will lay down my life to keep him today
They saw his love for me on that day
And went on there way and left me to stay
Dad we did all things together
We worked hard to fight the weather
Cutting wood and stacking it together
Water we pumped by hand
And hauled it across the land
In the warmest and coldest of weather
When we worked together
It became not a task but a pleasure
Because we were still together
Our troubles were like a feather
Oh Dad I thank God for you
For your unconditional love
That can only come from above
One day we will all be
Is my very plea
With Jesus you see
Mom Dad & Me!
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Chester_England_White
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2004-01-16 22:02:51]
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Re: Dad your love was unconditional ( Fathers Day)
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 11:42:44 PM AEST
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| Chester, your heart is so overwhelmingly filled with the love of our savior, only a great man as your father could of taught all this and more, may you always be blessed, as I read this I think my computer screen turned colors of the rainbow, your heart glows, thanks so much for sharing this part of your life, take care, Val |
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Re: Dad your love was unconditional ( Fathers Day)
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 01:05:54 AM AEST
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| i dont suscribe to yourr faith.... but that was a good poem.. |
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Re: Dad your love was unconditional ( Fathers Day)
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by bychristimsaved on
Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 01:57:16 AM AEST
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This was an amazing poem you wrote...i have gone through similar issues with my family, though not nearly as bad....just remember that jesus loves you very much!!!
may he bless you!
jordan |
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