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Andúnië

Contributed by fionndruinne on Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 09:44:38 PM in AEST
Topic: mythology





Shining ones pass
Into the West
Shining songs linger
On the lips of Men
Like a light lessening
When sun has set

Auta Eldalië
Ciri Ciryar

Twilight fades
The shadow grows
Stars falter
Dimming to darkness
Sad hearts yearn
On forsaken shores

Tulë Mornië
Hostar lumbar

Harps are silent
In hands of men
Who have not heart
To sing the hope
The last song
That lingers on

Firi estel
Lantar lindar

When all that is marred
Shall be mended
All who are hurt
Shall be healed
All that was darkness
Shall find the dawn

Alcarnen Eruo
Talta mornië




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Re: Andúnië (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 01:12:39 AM AEST
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im not really into the whole lotr , but your poem was n.i.c.e.


Re: Andúnië (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 05:45:37 PM AEST
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Elbereth, Gilthoniel... SEE! I know elvish too!
Yes, very good!
Good cousin... good cousin...
David


Re: Andúnië (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 18th January 2004 @ 03:31:06 AM AEST
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this is very pretty:) hugs n' love nessa


Re: Andúnië (User Rating: 1 )
by faith_my_eyes on Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 02:44:52 PM AEST
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ugh, Andrew, more elves!

JUST KIDDING!

Great job, as always! I love the art in your style. Very beautiful, even though I am not into the whole middle earth thing!


Re: Andúnië (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 02:02:56 AM AEST
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Your gonna have to excuse me here (it's early in the morning in England) when i read you had watched the return of the king i thought you wrote ELVIS poetry!
I thought oh! that's different! now i've read it i realize its not about the king, but a very unique and well written poem about elves.
I'm going back to bed!
yours insanely
wildejohnny.


Re: Andúnië (User Rating: 1 )
by liquidsunshine on Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 02:44:31 PM AEST
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Since I'm not into the whole LOTR thing, all I can say is that this poem is really pretty.
Love,
Chelsea


Re: Andúnië (User Rating: 1 )
by HellsLibrarian on Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 09:51:31 AM AEST
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That was beautiful. I just wish I knew gaelic.


Re: Andúnië (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 05:02:40 PM AEST
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Wow! This is an amazing poem. I truly think you are a brilliant poet.


Re: Andúnië (User Rating: 1 )
by yellow_sundragon on Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 04:48:31 PM AEST
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Talta mornië....?

No i ahië ya meril cenë Ambaressë.

It will happen.


Re: Andúnië (User Rating: 1 )
by Tanmaya on Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 04:46:36 AM AEST
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I love this!
Makes me wish I had written it.

I have been trying to get to learn Quenya lately. Haven't gotten anywhere yet, but this inspires me to get into it.



Re: Andúnië (User Rating: 1 )
by Rous on Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 08:53:42 PM AEST
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"Inspired by seeing the Return of the King, I had to try to write some Elvish poetry" And a good job you have done. Good imagery. Thank you.




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