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Alone
Contributed by
Avis_Nigra
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Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 09:33:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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We have been together as we always have,
great pleasure given and received,
and when you have fallen asleep
I who has served your needs remain awake
in the dark
it was your pleasure only, not mine.
in the dark I remain with you,
my tears unseen, my sobs unheard,
for I am with you and the same time
Alone
Then you came along, we spend much time,
for a moment you seemed to be the one
but the more I looked for you
the more you made me wait
until you finally disappeared.
I know you are in bad shape,
it was not me who has done that to you,
but it makes me suffer all the time,
in the end you left me
Alone
Then the sun came up and lit my life.
I finally found what I seeked
but you were hurt, your soul distort
from pain.
I am sitting here, your body next to mine
alive, empty, close to the touch your skin
out of reach your soul.
The light you shed made the shadows deeper
than ever
and finally left me
Alone
I am envied by others for you three.
Don't they see?
All you do is leave me three times
Alone
And so I feel the sharp kiss
will not hurt me but get me what I need,
for who not is can not be
Alone
Copyright ©
Avis_Nigra
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2004-01-16 21:33:04]
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Re: Alone
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 01:13:54 AM AEST
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| that poem was powerful... |
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Re: Alone
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by Cobalt on
Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 11:39:45 AM AEST
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| Indeed this poem was very powerful. It was an enjoyable read. I had questions but you answered them. Nicely done. |
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Re: Alone
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by Avis_Nigra on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 08:43:49 AM AEST
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| Thank ou for your kind words... it in fact is the first poem I published anywhere and I was afraid it not to be good enough to do so... |
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Re: Alone
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 14th February 2004 @ 04:15:32 AM AEST
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| damn... i do believe we are witnessing the rising of a true talent... |
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Re: Alone
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by silent on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 06:12:56 AM AEST
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This poem is quite disturbing, you make such an impact, just got me sucked in further and further the more i came to the end.
I relate very well to this feeling, glad you posted it.
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Re: Alone
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by Necromant on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 02:00:38 PM AEST
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Wow what an amazing poem! Its really great!!! Transfers a lot of emotion!!!
Anne :D |
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