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seven minutes
Contributed by
dolly_dagger
on
Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 07:36:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Hello, my darling stranger
There to smile and torment me,
I embrace air as you dance out of reach.
Walking at a pace I just can't keep up with.
You're so familiar from everywhere and
Everyone reminds me of you.
What do you have to say for yourself?
Am I a stranger stranger to you than you are to me?
Come closer...I remember your light. Your warmth. Can't you feel it?
Seven minutes
Seems so much further now
Seven minutes
of wasted time
Started hurling us worlds apart.
Copyright ©
dolly_dagger
... [
2004-01-16 19:36:56]
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Re: seven minutes
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 01:56:31 AM AEST
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you got me thinking about your 7 minutes and i started to think about how peoples lives can change in such a short amount of time. Good write i really enjoyed this.
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Re: seven minutes
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by Queen_Dolly on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 04:23:08 AM AEST
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So much can happen in so little time =)
Beautiful.
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Re: seven minutes
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 06:33:12 PM AEST
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| Impressive. I appreciate your use of intangibility to describe everything about the stranger in your seven minutes. I don't know what else to take from this poem, so I'll leave it here. |
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