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Nowhere
Contributed by
alecfernadez
on
Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 01:38:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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Lost in a transcending void,
Swimming in darkness,
No obstacles to avoid,
No-one to suspect,
Lost in nothing,
Floating in suspension,
Its a mad thing,
To be lost is my intention,
To avoid life is my life,
Nowhere to run nowhere,
Lost everything even my knife,
But theres no-one to stare,
I'm free nowhere
nowhere
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alecfernadez
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2004-01-16 13:38:40] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Nowhere
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 02:14:55 PM AEST (User
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Something about this is captivating.... It is beautifully written.
Jenni |
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Re: Nowhere
(User Rating: 1 ) by AbstractMinded on
Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 02:33:18 PM AEST (User
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Nice...well-written. Good job |
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Re: Nowhere
(User Rating: 1 ) by Solmyr1404 on
Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 03:18:07 PM AEST (User
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very interesting. i don't know what else to say about it. very confusing as well. |
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Re: Nowhere
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 03:44:10 PM AEST (User
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seems like it is the dark and endless part of my mind, great poem, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Nowhere
(User Rating: 1 ) by Cobalt on
Friday, 30th January 2004 @ 11:04:22 AM AEST (User
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It's brilliant. |
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