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Next To Me
Contributed by
misstressdistrubed
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Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 01:36:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Your lips press against mine
You touch me softly and devine
Your body lies on top of me
Showing me all you can be
Our bodies become one
We say we're having fun
It is complete ectasy
The way I feel with you next to me
But only a moment will it last
Before long youll be my past
We'll go our seprate ways
And hope that things will be the same
But time changes all
And people get up when they fall
It will be a sweet memory
Of the time I had you next to me
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misstressdistrubed
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2004-01-16 13:36:18]
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Re: Next To Me
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by alecfernadez on
Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 01:47:10 PM AEST
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This is a really beautiful poem, and Its just so powerful! Keep up the great work
Alec Fernandez
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Re: Next To Me
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 02:17:25 PM AEST
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This is lovely....... (it needs a spell check, though..)
Jenni |
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Re: Next To Me
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 03:44:23 PM AEST
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| ahh memories.............. hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Next To Me
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by Cobalt on
Friday, 30th January 2004 @ 10:45:39 AM AEST
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| Nice write. I can totaly relate to this. I love how you wrote this. |
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