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Wasting my time
Contributed by
Necromant
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Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 09:18:08 AM in AEST
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I’m wasting precious time everyday,
Letting the clock tick my life away,
Watching my short lived days pass by,
Wondering, why am I living? I want to die!
Everything around me is so empty,
Existence, why does it have to be so gloomy?
Confusion, illusion, my daily bread,
Wanting to live a life without regret,
I long to find a place, where I truly belong,
Where everything is perfect, nothing there is wrong,
Dreaming all day long, why can’t I be strong?
And face life and all the things it brings along
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Re: Wasting my time
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 09:24:03 AM AEST
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Ohh, I've felt pretty down like that. I'm usually a very happy person, but I like to keep my feelings to myself, so they just kind of grow. That's where writing is a great help. I can just let it all go..... no worries...... But I know exactly what you mean. And when I sometimes look back on those times that I felt that way, I wonder why? Things usually aren't as bad as they seem (atleast for me..... don't know about you.....) But seriously though, things aren't as bad as they might seem......
Just the thoughts in my head at the moment =)
A well written poem too ; )
God bless,
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Re: Wasting my time
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by whisper-of-night on
Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 10:51:06 AM AEST
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Oh no, not again! Where is that smile gone? Life isn't perfect, but there are always beautiful things for us to look out for, do not lock youself under the shadow, be strong!
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Re: Wasting my time
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by forever_lonely on
Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 11:46:28 AM AEST
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hey anne
A lovely and brilliant poem hun, feelings and emotions are sometimes the downfall of ourselves so dont let them ruin your pretty face with a frown, just let them pass and turn it upside down hehe
All the best hun
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Re: Wasting my time
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by Empty_Soul on
Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 01:03:02 PM AEST
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Now do you believe anne? I said you were a poet but you are like me and said NO! lol, stubborn. lol. quality poem and dont say its only any good cos you helped or anything like that cos it was only 2 words!!! lmao, really great poem again anne, look forward to your next one!
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Re: Wasting my time
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 03:03:44 PM AEST
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Beautiful write...listen to the advice given to you by the others...
Jenni |
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Re: Wasting my time
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 06:31:44 AM AEST
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Yes! You captured the feeling perfectly. I can relate to the frustration in your words. Very good poem, I especially liked the sing-song feel of the last stanza.
Truly,
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Re: Wasting my time
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by Wrybod on
Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 07:19:08 PM AEST
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I have felt like you do at odd periods in my life
in between obsessions. Motor cycling, sailing, golf, hang gliding, model railways, model aeroplanes, poetry, model yacht racing.........
Look around you something is bound to turn up that interests you, that brings you into contact with other people.......
Something is better than nothing
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Re: Wasting my time
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by gus on
Sunday, 18th January 2004 @ 05:14:57 AM AEST
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| Yeah like it...short and sweet....sure captured a lot in a short space...and yes definetly feel like that many a day.....great stuff...cheers:) |
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Re: Wasting my time
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by lostinmyself on
Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 11:40:48 AM AEST
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| you just described how i feel a lot of the time. theres more out there i think. good write. luv phil xxx |
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Re: Wasting my time
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by deathdrop on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 08:53:36 AM AEST
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i feel it too, and i've notest that you make a habbit to look at most of my poems, thankyou!
i really like this one, more than any thing else you've written, don't ask me why, i'm unsure my self... |
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Re: Wasting my time
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 02:47:30 PM AEST
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| i don't know what to write at the moment but surely everyone will have ups and downs throughout his life. you are not the only person that fells like this. me too. |
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Re: Wasting my time
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by Cobalt on
Friday, 30th January 2004 @ 10:16:17 AM AEST
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| Wow. Anne. So bleak. So gloomy. It's like being caught in a freezing storm. You are too a good poet hon. Don't ever forget that. This was good and I hope you find your smiles again soon if they are gone. |
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Re: Wasting my time
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by Merry on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 03:03:02 PM AEST
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Excellent write Anne - I chide myself often for wasting time, when in reality time is the only thing of value we have or will ever have. However it seems a part of human nature to 'waste it'. I tend to think we humans thrive on misery, it forces us to kick and scratch our way out of the dark and gloomy existence - to search for the light. - as in your poem, you are looking for something to dispel the gloom. Ah and as if by magic the sun has just broken through the gray skies here and is pouring in my window like hot butterscotch - a message from the gods to go out and get some fresh air.
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Re: Wasting my time
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by faithmairee on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 11:10:07 PM AEST
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there's no denying life is hard...you just gotta have a little faith...i could relate to your heart felt pain and the beautiful and deep words you used to describe that state...it's easy to ask, "Is this all there is"? INSTEAD, I have to ask myself "How can I best enjoy this moment? It's usually by getting on here and writing. I loved this poem for its openness and sincerity...good job!
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