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broken mirrors
Contributed by
netweight23oz
on
Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 02:55:13 AM in AEST
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Shades of gray feelings that clutter my head
Swallowing sugar coated lies, as I get drunk
Off jealousy, bad vodka and blood
Drunk enough to drive home, and pray for the brakes to lock
Your like a fountain to me
Gushing words of praise
That wrap around my neck
As my naivety ties the knot
And my lifeless body dangles
And I whisper to forget me not
Im enticed by the reflection of your eyes
Staring back in those pools of maroon on the floor
And shards of broken mirrors lay on the floor
As sharp as your lies and as dull as my eyes
Like a fruitless search for self worth
Destroyed this lack of words…
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2004-01-16 02:55:13]
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Re: broken mirrors
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 06:15:57 AM AEST
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Your friends were right it is a good poem.
Well written it had a catchy flow to it.
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Re: broken mirrors
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by CrucifiedAndLeft2Die on
Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 01:42:00 PM AEST
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| This was a very nicely written poem, good job- |
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