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crystal snow crystal tears
Contributed by
desertwispers
on
Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 02:53:16 AM in AEST
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Crystal snow
on this winters day
crystal tears
wont go away
sticking to my eyelashes tight
when they fall they turn to ice.
Crystal snow
so beautiful still
crystal tears
voids to fill
as the snow
starts coming down
the crystal tears fall again.
Crystal snow
frozen so
like a tear
that hangs on to long
then lets go
to fall down
and disappear
in the crystal snow
Crystal Michelle L
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desertwispers
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2004-01-16 02:53:16]
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Re: crystal snow crystal tears
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 05:18:55 AM AEST
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This is really quite a touching and beautiful poem. I have a soft spot for the sad writes, and this one will stick with me for a long time.
Truly,
-V.S. |
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Re: crystal snow crystal tears
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 06:19:01 AM AEST
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Very sad write you kinda put me off snow.
I felt cold reading this poem, but it was well written and I liked it. keep up the poetry as you are good at it. |
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Re: crystal snow crystal tears
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by MissLee on
Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 01:49:04 PM AEST
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Aye, nice one girly like how you used your name its mmine too
-Crystal Lee |
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Re: crystal snow crystal tears
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by tiredartist on
Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 03:31:14 AM AEST
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| I like the title. It makes me think of something I saw once when I was a young 'un. |
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Re: crystal snow crystal tears
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by Cobalt on
Thursday, 29th January 2004 @ 03:33:47 PM AEST
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| Well this is an interesting write. I can't figure it out for the life of me... Nice. I like the description. Very good write. |
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Re: crystal snow crystal tears
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 08:10:58 PM AEST
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Really interesting poem, as I wrote something along a similar vein, a few weeks ago.
A nice association between the snow and pain.
Good write. |
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