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Tommy
Contributed by
Mouth
on
Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 01:01:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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So little boy
You went off trying to be a man,
But got yourself shot in the head, instead
Hope it was worth what was under her skirt,
Because her lips can't kiss you anymore.
So what good was all that loving for
If you can't taste her lips anymore?
Little boy trying to be a man
Got himself shot instead
Over a girl and a good time
Doin' shots of tequila and lime.
What good was all that fun for,
If you are'nt living anymore?
So little boy,
How does it feel to finally be a man?
Nestled in your cold coffin
Deep beneath the ground
Silenced by that bullet,
I can almost hear the sound
As it echoed through the halls
Spilling your blood
All over the walls
On her new white dress
And pretty face.
Little boy you've created such a mess
'Cause now your mamma's bought
A new black dress
All because you went off trying to be a man
But got yourself shot in the head instead.
Copyright ©
Mouth
... [
2004-01-16 01:01:16]
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Re: Tommy
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by CrucifiedAndLeft2Die on
Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 01:33:07 PM AEST
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| this was a great poem with a strong point...i enjoyed reading it very much--- |
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Re: Tommy
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by Cobalt on
Thursday, 29th January 2004 @ 03:23:10 PM AEST
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| I like how this one was done. It was pretty good. Nice write. |
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