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the breaking of a heart
Contributed by
arakrune
on
Sunday, 1st September 2002 @ 07:45:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Whipping winds blow thru your mind
Why did they leave you, so unkind?
You feel lost and confused
Your heart is deeply bruised
You feel beaten an abused
You can’t see past your darkened views
The darkness seems to creep ever closer
You feel like you gave your all to a user
You wander on thru life aimlessly
As they seem to flaunt what they did shamelessly
Your friends say time heals
But you can’t see or find a way to deal
You know in your head they are right
But your heart can’t see that sight
So you plod onward like a robot
Every time you see them it’s like a fatal shot
Each night you cry yourself to sleep
You never thought you would sink this deep
Then it slowly starts to fade
As easier comes the daily charade
Then it is all but forgot
Except for that occasional shot
Then you meet some-one who captures your heart
And suddenly you are ready for another fresh start
STR
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arakrune
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Re: the breaking of a heart
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by Wicked on
Thursday, 3rd October 2002 @ 04:26:29 PM AEST
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| very well written my friend,,,,i can relate all to well to this. hugssssssssssssss!! |
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Re: the breaking of a heart
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by lilch4ever on
Tuesday, 31st December 2002 @ 01:07:29 AM AEST
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| Very good and nicely written. |
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Re: the breaking of a heart
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 1st January 2003 @ 09:12:16 PM AEST
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| very good message i can relate |
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Re: the breaking of a heart
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by Wachumiri on
Thursday, 16th October 2003 @ 12:40:20 AM AEST
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The hardest thing in love is to let the other person go, and it's so hard to hang on to hope, the hope that someday someone else will touch your life as the last person did. It's awesome that you could do that.
I wish you the best.
David |
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