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My Mate
Contributed by
jeanie
on
Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 05:39:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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My Mate
Ah, it's you again
I see you every day
I'm sick of your sweet face
And baby blues
I can't stand your shy flirty smile
I'm tired of looking at you ass in your tight jeans
You've no glamour I could take away
You're just a mess
Hollow craps
You're a posh trash
Playing a young lady
You're an overgrown child
Have you heard already
Girl get out of my sight!
Be aware for your clash
Copyright ©
jeanie
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2004-01-15 17:39:08]
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Re: My Mate
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by Aika on
Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 07:25:17 PM AEST
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OOOPS! i am confused..
kinda angry..
but written sooo lovely! love, aika:-) |
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Re: My Mate
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 29th January 2004 @ 04:05:03 AM AEST
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It's Silchan ;)
ohohoho, kinda angry :p but, very lovely and that funny-angry tone really fits the poem ;) and...knowing who it is for....HAHAHAHHA :DD COOL :D
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Re: My Mate
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by Cobalt on
Thursday, 29th January 2004 @ 12:37:50 PM AEST
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| I don't know who it's about.... Ah well. I like the angry tone of this. It is great. Very well expressed. |
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