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Vita Vitae
Contributed by
jeanie
on
Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 05:31:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Vita Vitae
I go over hurdles of days
One after another they pass
I gotta face bunch of lies
Tomorrow what comes
I feel the beating of drums
It's just my heart
They say it gets
Jumping out of your chest
When you're in love
I'm scared of scars
On my heart
I don't sell cheap
You'd have to cheat
To beat me down
Of my throne
So
Better let me wear
My crown of thorns
Copyright ©
jeanie
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2004-01-15 17:31:41]
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Re: Vita Vitae
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by WordPoet on
Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 06:32:04 PM AEST
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I understand your comment aboutthe title now... -=grin=-
Your poem seems dark but dark is a place many people face each day and I'm sure that many people can relate.
Keep sharing. |
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Re: Vita Vitae
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by Aika on
Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 07:21:40 PM AEST
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and how you invent titles? LOL, sorry.. ya know me.. :-)
Wonderful writing, Jeanie, I mean:-) and happier, girly, ya know.. :-) Love, aika:-) |
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Re: Vita Vitae
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by Cobalt on
Thursday, 29th January 2004 @ 12:27:12 PM AEST
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| I liked this. Ecspecially the last stanza. Very nice. |
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