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Just As
Contributed by
Exodus-On-Life
on
Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 04:58:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
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As I sit here waiting
And life just passes me by
As I wait into the sun setting
Silence, your perfect alibi
I throw myself into deception
I crawl to escape my despair
I was grasping for your security
And I awoke to find myself in nowhere
I'm out of this head
Sinking into this ugly miserable skin
I wonder of tomorrow, hopelessly
Something else I can die in
I know you've always been out of my sight
And you struggle and scrape me on my knees
I wonder what it would be like forever
I throw my echoes into the wind to join my pleas
You sang me to sleep tonight
Your voice ringing in the sound of water
You left before I awoke in this skin
You never said goodbye, didn't even bother
I'm waiting out the miseries
I sit here falling into your stare
The twists of joy surrounding me
And a new face has taken me there
Frowns that fade to shadows
Losing this face as I lose my despair
I deserve the best that I am
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Re: Just As
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by Lessa on
Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 07:32:44 PM AEST
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| awsome write |
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Re: Just As
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by pooja on
Sunday, 18th January 2004 @ 06:51:32 AM AEST
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Beautiful writing.
Simple yet very vivid in description. |
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Re: Just As
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by Cobalt on
Thursday, 29th January 2004 @ 12:03:31 PM AEST
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| Oh wow. That was incredible. I really like how you wrote this and I loved every single line. Well done. |
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