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goodbye to you
Contributed by
lil_angel_eyes
on
Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 02:58:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I cant do this anymore
My heart and soul lay on the floor
I cant spend each day crying
now im fed up of trying
if you want her then thats fine
Cause i dont want you as mine
Ive had enough you tore me apart
you ripped me up and shredded my heart
Time has come to say goodbye
no matter how many tears i cry
This is it its lets not pretend
our love story has come to an end
I loved you once but now i feel
your love for me wasnt real
Im not gona stand in your way
i will let you leave today
my love i gave was very true
I gave all i had everything to you
I cant compeate its not a game
our love will never be the same
If your love is for her but your staying with me
i would rather you say and with her you should be
the darkness i thought our love would light
now its gone and ive lost the fight
My heart, my soul ripped in two
now i say goodbye to you.
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2004-01-15 14:58:21]
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Re: goodbye to you
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by faith_my_eyes on
Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 03:34:33 PM AEST
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| This is very raw. I know what it's like to lose someone who loved another, but someday you'll be glad they're gone... because you'll meet someone who truly loves you. |
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Re: goodbye to you
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by Solmyr1404 on
Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 03:40:13 PM AEST
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| I've gone through that before. But the poem is good, although sad. |
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Re: goodbye to you
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by DreamWeaver on
Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 04:26:57 PM AEST
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| Painful emotions expressed in an excellent write - well done ... Jan |
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Re: goodbye to you
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by WordPoet on
Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 06:43:49 PM AEST
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I heard a saying that I found to be very true, "No man or woman is worth your tears, and the one who is, wont make you cry."
You will find the one who's worth your tears, let your heart rest in the knowledge that though the pain is intense it is temporary and you are worthy of love.
Nice write. |
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Re: goodbye to you
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by CuttersAngel on
Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 09:30:29 PM AEST
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| I love the way you rhymed!!! This poem reminds me so much of what I would like to say to my first true love and all the pain he caused... You do a great job!! |
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