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To Be Thin
Contributed by
Jax
on
Sunday, 1st September 2002 @ 05:40:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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Can somebody help me?
I am falling fast
into a whirlpool that is surrounding me.
Like an avalanche it began small
and escalated.
Slowly rising
to a piek
and I can't say no.
I can't hold back.
It's just to easy
now that I know how.
I just have to.
Help me.
I can't controle it.
What the hell,
here goes
the tears
down
my
eyes.
Up
my
throat.
Out
and
gone.
It's gone.
Thank god.
It's out of me,
once again.
It's just so easy.
It's just too hard,
to defeat my mind
that tells me it's ok
to die to be thin.
Copyright ©
Jax
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2002-09-01 17:40:02]
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Re: To Be Thin
(User Rating: 1 )
by Adreana on
Monday, 2nd September 2002 @ 04:33:59 AM AEST
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| This is an incredibly emotional poem. I know how this feels... I live this stuggle and I know how hard it is to resist... Hang in there... Be strong... this too shall pass... talk to somebody... it helps... cry... cry alot... it helps... My thoughts are with you... or whoever you are writing about... })({ ~Adreana |
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Re: To Be Thin
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by Sweetie on
Tuesday, 3rd September 2002 @ 02:34:55 AM AEST
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OH MY GOODNESS I KNOW HOW YOU OR WHOEVER FEELS!! I live that way everyday!! My prayers are with you take care
Sweetie |
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Re: To Be Thin
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 21st September 2002 @ 04:46:50 PM AEST
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I hope you or who ever this is, is getting help. I was anorexic...still strugle with it a lot. It is not a fun way to live. To be so thin that one can't sit down because your bones hurt. I am praying so much for you.
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