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Tell Me This
Contributed by
Eve
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Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 01:59:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Tell me this much at least-
If the earth doesn't turn and gravity does cease
Will the oceans fall away?
And if I sit and watch the world fall
And never make a sound through it all
Will the demons do what they say?
If Truth herself failed and lied
And Life as we knew it withered and died
Would Discord take her place?
And if the winds stopped blowing
And all the streams stopped flowing
Would I ever forget your face?
Copyright ©
Eve
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2004-01-15 13:59:14]
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Re: Tell Me This
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by Necromant on
Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 03:18:52 PM AEST
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Nice poem! Hmm very interesting and thoughtful questions...Nice style
Anne :D |
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Re: Tell Me This
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 05:27:14 AM AEST
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I see...You cornered the writers' block, grabbed a chisel and hammer, and crafted this magnificent poem. Yes, i'm humbled by your talent, enraptured by thy words.
Keep writing, or be covered in ants,
-V.S. |
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Re: Tell Me This
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by Kie on
Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 12:07:42 PM AEST
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Deep questions to ponder and you brought them alive in your poem. I look forward to the next one.
Kie |
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